If you have not opened your spam folder and read these perfect example of persuasive writing, you have been missing some learning in management. A recent visit to me, was a revelation on my popularity. I was surprised such genuine interesting highly persuasive beauties wanting for my company.
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Here is a classic example of their relentless assault. A long copy matter, drafted with insights unknowingly pressing right levers. The errors are strategic. They have a purpose. They help the text beat filters. ( The red text area are from the message and in blue my attempt to decipher them for you)
As it is working on a cyclic loop that is not being completed due to lack of consumer feedback, how is she to know that it is mostly putting me off.
There are management lessons to be learnt, if only you were analyzing it with an open uncluttered mind. I read many of them, before picking this as a representative sample.
Read the highly persuasive nakedly transparent communication. It has the power to tempt the right mind. Waiting to trap you in your moments of weakness.
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BABE… i guess your not getting any of my email huh? I have been tryign to email u so many times but this dam laptop is such a piece of garbage and keeps freezing.. anyways how u been? In case u don’t know who this is its ME Remy.. we used to chat a bit on Facebook and then I think u deleted me 🙁 haha.. anyways guess what… I got 2 things to tell u.. both good news.. 1) im single now.. yup me and my bf broke up about 3 months ago… and 2) guess where im moving? RIGHT EFFING NEAR U.. lol… ur actually the only person im gonna know there.. well 3 cousins too but i cant chill with them lol.…………………………………….
Good opening. Situation problem definition. Perfect personalising of a very generalised letter. It is the same one going to all of you. Use of term ‘freezing’ to anchor here so that warm and hot can follow later. Laptop introduced within the first two lines- to define the internet based proposal. And the first hint of offer- SINGLE- and moving next to you- and then Bamm the ‘exclusivity- ur actually the only person im gonna know there’.
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I remember when we chatted u told me u thought i was cute and u wanted to chill so now we finally can HAHA! im kinda scared to move.. im hoping this email addy is still the one you use and u can chat with me ebfore i get there.. maybe even help me move my shit in…are u still on facebook? i cudnt find ui wa soo confused…anyways im gonna need someone to show me the town and take me out so u better be around bebe… we only chatted a couple times but i remember thinking to myself i wanted to get ot know u better when i was single..and i thoguth u were cute too but cudnt tell u cause i wasnt single lol…ok so more info about me.. well im 23.. virgo.. love the outdoors and love to socialize, go out for drinks, restaurants, movies etc.. travel.. i have a lil kitty named BOO and i luv her to death… uhhh oh im a super horny gurl too but every gurl is they just wont admit it. so ilove watching p0rn and all that.. love sex etc blah blah blah…who doesnt..
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A hint of checking and playing on your moment of vulnerability. You are prized and there s a small appreciation. Then the package comes alive without pictures. Kitty- cat-pussy subliminal connections. Promise of loyalty in the game. ‘i thought u were cute too but cudnt tell u cause i wasnt single lol…’. She is only now talking because she is single. And then slowly erasing your guilt associated with watching porn and wanting ( loving ) sex.
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I really hope we get a chance to chat for a bit either online or on the fone before i get there enxt week.. i hope u remember me and still wanna chill and aren’t married yet lol.. OH YA also.. i need to find a job when i get there.. do u have any hookups or know anybody hiring? id LOVE to work in a bar or s0mehting like that…really anythgin cause my current job is fun and all.. and technically i CUD keep doign it but i want a change.. I currently work from home and well thats cool but i need ot be out meeting people.. oh wait. i dont think i ever actually told u what I did? hmm shud i……???? ok WELLLL… and dont get all weirded out on me.. i work on a webcam chat community site and i get paid to chat with people and get naked HHAHA…
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Introduction of Phone as a medium of connect. It is a smooth sailing till now. Deliberate unsuspecting drop of words like Single, Hookup, weird and the first hint of things to come.
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BOMB right :)? I KNOW.. like I figure iim horny anyways why not get paid to chat with people and play with myself
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heheh…anyways i hope u dont look down on that and NO THATS NOT WHY IM CONTACTING U RELAX URSELF lol… i actually need help once i move and i remembered u live there so im reaching out….like I said before this computer is a complete piece of CRAP and freezes NON STOP.. ive tried ot send this email to u maybe 3 times already and im hopign this time i can hit SEND before i run into trouble lol..
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Once slapped on- immediately make an attempt to relax. Another sprinkling of strog subliminal words- RELAX URSELF, NON STOP, Reaching out,
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ANYWAYS.. heres the deal….every month natalie (my boss) gives each of us 3 VIP codes to give out to whoever we want.. so with this code u can lgoin to watch me at work for free and dont have to pay like everyone else… the only way i can give u one of the codes (so we can chat) is if you absolutey DO NOT give it out to anyone else and u ONLY USE IT FOR URSELF… i only get 3 a month and she gets pissed if more than 3 people use them so DONT SHARE IT MISTER… i figured u cud always email me back instead but my email account doesnt even let me login half the time..
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Now press the button. A semi polite command, a code sharing to login. Transfer of responsibility of privacy to the reader. And then the small unsuspecting denial of replying to the mail
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So the bets palce ot chat me is my chat room…if theres anyone else logged in when u sign in ill boot them out.. but remember DONT SHARE THIS PASSWORD PLEASE BABE IM BEGGING U.. I TRUST U… im online most of the day now to try and save money for my move.. also since im in such a huge debt already form my student loan 🙁
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Best has been turned into Bets. Now the kill ‘BABE IM BEGGING U’ and the writer know where she is leading the person. Most of her customer wants and believes that the babe will beg for it.
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I really think we need to chat before i get there and make sure u even remember me hahha.. any-ways ive rambled on and on now and ur probably soooo annnoyed with me so ill stop now.. im gonna go start work.. I really hope u come chat me. it wud make my day and releive a lot of my stress about the move………………………………..
The prince charming mode checked in- and a simple Relive the stress promise
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REALLY i mean that….anyways once i see u in insdie ill shoot u myc ell number and u can gimme yours.. if u don’t wanna come chat i understand but its really the only palce to find me now days.. if u email me abck ill probably get it once i get there after my internet is setup so about 2-3 weeks fomr now.. but im hoping to see u in my chat room.. rmemeber its 100% free with this code im gonna give u.. just DONT GIVE IT OUT OR ILL KICK U IN THE BALLS INSTEAD OF LXXK U IN THE BALLS WHEN IS EE U hahahahha…k babe im out for now… chat ya soon.. kisses xoxo Remy
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The final round. ‘once i see u in insdie ill shoot’, the extend they can go without any problem. And if that was not there the imagery of LXXK U in the Balls is thrown up.
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Remy is such a good girl, it seems she writes to me quite frequently. I am surprised at her perseverance,, sending similar letter repeatedly. Yeah, sometimes she also sends her picture links, which my MAC warns me not to open. It makes me worry and hence this public acknowledgement by presenting her letter.
There is a lot to learn from her communication. There is a smooth transition in the whole content. It builds and leads you to next level and then stops just at the stage to make you do that harmless click on the link..
Poor Remmy is not alone. There are many more in the trash bin wanting my undivided attention, like her writing gets with many readers.. However, I don’t think I will be focusing on them.
The deliberate spelling errors not only beat the system but works on the individual mind as a secret code. Exclusivity. Privacy. Desire. Demand– all is between jut the two of them.
And yes, if you are reading this line. Content is the king..
Keep the interest and the bait live for the person.
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